A poem is a discussion. For me it’s mostly a discussion between myself and the Lord I follow. I just let it turn into words. That’s what makes a poem live. It has me in it – or you in it. That’s why there is no criticism nor need we fear it. In “Stronger” I am struggling to choose. Never easy.
I want to be
strong stronger
tear down the trees
and crush the mountains
I want to be strong
turning back the tide
defying everything
“Can’t be”
you said
“Strength is found
in weakness”
Don’t want weakness
yet
here’s the thing
when I am weak
weaker weakest
you feel close
closer closest
which to choose?
Beautiful Jim!
Yes, I choose weakness,
so I can feel the closeness of God.